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This is amazing. I really liked this. Keep up the good work! -Rick

Hmm...I agree with Penguinattack. It's good still, but it needs adjustments. Keep up the good work! -Rick

This is really good with the rythm, words, and tone. I really liked this piece of work. Keep up the good work! -Rick

XD Nice one. This is a really good, but, random song. I really like how you did it about video games. Keep up the good work! -Rick

I really like this Flem. I like the how you kept up the ryhms. This is really good for a first time song. Keep up the good work! -Rick

I think it's better Bella has Edward. If she would have chosen Jacob, she'd miss Edward soo much. She would've been happy with Jacob too, but she loves Edward more. ...

Order it from online. I loved the series and I'm looking foreward for Breaking Dawn to come out. -Rick

Hmmm... This is really good. Just by reading it, I can feel the emotion and sadness in it. Keep it up Crying Rain! :) -Rickage

This is a good poem. I like the details you used to explain how a spider works. This should be expaneded a little more. I'm not sure this belongs in ...

This seems to be a sign of depression, meaning as to wanting to die, but live to want to suffer on earth. It's good though. Keep it up!!! -Rick

This is really great Linds. It's show's how someone would feel to be lead on by someone. Were you ever lead on...? O.o

Hmm...the first two lines seem little off key. But, other than that, it's really nice poem.

It's a really nice poem. It goes to show how dedicated you are to the person you fell in love with.

hmmm...I really liked this Rieda. It's mysterious with details of what you're talking about. I may be able to think of a meaning for it..But, yeah, it's really excellent.

It's funny how my words All become so skewed When they earn refuge In your lost treasure casket At last. It's a very simple, and short poem. Is there a ...